Hamm's Fic with an Interesting Twist.

[Lunarzius]

Okay, so I had an interesting idea that could be quite fun, depending how this turns out. I've written a prologue for it, and I'll post it here.

A storm raged above the open seas, it's dark, rolling tendrils of black cloud expanding outwards over the violent waves. Several ships were on the crashing sea, thrown around terribly by the ferocity of the storm despite the magical shields the Unicorns had formed. Suddenly, an arc of lightning shot downwards and collided with one of the magical shields, causing a massive flash of light. Once the brightness had dissipated, it was plain enough to see that the ship was gone.

Once I'm back on the computer I'll place a link to the google doc that I'm writing this on.


What you guys have to do: is come up with something that should happen in the story, such as "The lost ship turns up in the Antarctic" After you've had the time to post your ideas, I'll select the best one, and leave a message saying that I won't be a accepting new ideas until I've written the next segment.
Hope you guys enjoy it, as this is a way for me to keeo the storyline fresh, and thus I'll want to keep writing it.

Fic Link And here it is, the link to the Fic! Now you should be able to see any edit to it that I make, everytime I sync ;)
Please note: Suggestions will only be taken when I ask for them, and the "Suggestion Posts" will usually be centred around a question, such as "What will happen to >specified object/person

Last edited by Hamzor on Wed Sep 26, 2012 1:36 pm; edited 2 times in total

[Lightningcould]

Well-detailed and interesting prologue, good job!

[Lunarzius]

Well-detailed and interesting prologue, good job!

There's a minor edit to the OP, and if you have any ideas, that's what the while idea of this thing is ;)

Everypony has until I get out of school in about 6 hours to give me your ideas!

[Lightningcould]

Well, I think there should be an enigmatic creature that caused this. For Example, Sirens from the Greek mythos. So, before they dissapeared the sailors heard singing before they dissapeared to thin air.

[Lunarzius]

I am now not taking any more ideas until the next segment. Since only one person posted a suggestion, I think you can guess what I went with.
Stay tuned everypony!

[Heartless_Soul]

WAIT!

Since the ship dissapeared, you could say it traveled dimensions, and went into any other world of your choose, but i thought earth would be a interesting plot.

AKA the lightning caused a timewarp. Yea..

[Lunarzius]

I am glad to report that the fic's current length is one and a half pages in lenght! I will also be posting the link to the fic in the OP once I get home. I still haven't got to the par-But why spoil the surprise? You'll find out when you read each new segment ;)

Also, motivation is quite high because your ideas will keep my writing ideas fresh.

[SandWolf96]

Mabe you could use Scylla and Charybdis from greek mythology. The're sea monsters too. And MLP is full of Greek mythology. Trust me I'm an engineer I've found many

[Lightningcould]

Mabe you could use Scylla and Charybdis from greek mythology. The're sea monsters too. And MLP is full of Greek mythology. Trust me I'm an engineer I've found many

AND NO ONE DARED TO MAKE A VIDEO ABOUT THE GREEK MYTHOS REFERENCES!! LIKE THE MOST OBVIOUS ONE WAS THE RETURN OF HARMONY WITH THE THE APPLES TALKING TO APPLEJACK AND SEEING HER FUTURE. MOIRAI!!!!!!!

[SandWolf96]

Mabe you could use Scylla and Charybdis from greek mythology. The're sea monsters too. And MLP is full of Greek mythology. Trust me I'm an engineer I've found many

AND NO ONE DARED TO MAKE A VIDEO ABOUT THE GREEK MYTHOS REFERENCES!! LIKE THE MOST OBVIOUS ONE WAS THE RETURN OF HARMONY WITH THE THE APPLES TALKING TO APPLEJACK AND SEEING HER FUTURE. MOIRAI!!!!!!!

I would've understood it if you said The Three Fates.

[Lunarzius]

I've now posted the link to the fic in the OP!
Hope you guys enjoy it, and feel free to leave comments about whether you like it, any spelling/grammatical errors and what you think of it! Constructive criticism is always appreciated :D

And now it is time for the next section...
I think Heartless' idea could be very interesting, but I need you guys to decide on a few specifics, to be precise;
Which ship will be the one that was teleported through dimensions? It could be:
>The Flagship
>The Celestia
>The Luna
>The Mercury
The most popular chosen one wins. Also, where on Earth will they end up? This one is completely up to you. Have fun deciding, and just remember that I can't write anymore until you guys give me the required information for the next segment ;)

[SandWolf96]

The Luna get's warped away... wait for it... To the moon

[Heartless_Soul]

I like the Luna, and Celestia

[Lunarzius]

I like the Luna, and Celestia

Well, you have to choose one or the other Heartless and where they'd end up :3

EDIT: I'm going to give it another 30 minutes and so if you haven't suggested and want to, you still have some time. Just a quick reminder, the link is in the OP.

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