Fic on google docs

[Hemokal]

Here's the link to the story I'm writing on google docs. Thought I'd leave it here for anypony who may not have it yet. Also, feel free to criticize it here if there's anything you want changed or think could be better. Any and all criticism is helpful :P

Also, I'll be leaving a dotted line each night when I stop, for everypony to be able to keep up with and track progress in case they're interested. Anyway, here's the link. Feedback is welcome.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1GdN6xzSmH8TealHYh8Ok8YAvJ7DV2daGRUAYpmZM7XY/edit