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Post  the1templar Wed Jun 12, 2013 10:39 pm

damn it guys FS Angry seriously, i ask for feed back and no one bothers. whatever, Twi Derp seems it was silly to ask for help. guess i do live up well to my nickname.
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Post  Lordleelee2/ZardBrood Wed Jun 12, 2013 10:45 pm

I've been lazy ass hell when it comes to reading. Hell I SHOULD read it, I bookmarked it... Then just haven't gotten to it... Sometime this week I promise I will read it. Given I don't give feedback worth shit when it comes to writing...
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Post  Wolf Trainer Wed Jun 12, 2013 10:45 pm

the1templar wrote:damn it guys FS Angry seriously, i ask for feed back and no one bothers. whatever, Twi Derp seems it was silly to ask for help. guess i do live up well to my nickname.

I'm sorry man... I don't have time atm. I am at my parents doing work every moment I am awake. And tbh, I have a lot more than just that going on, but this isn't the place to put it. If I get a chance I'll look at it though. Please PM it to me. Maybe I can read it sometime this weekend. *hugs*
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Post  Lordleelee2/ZardBrood Thu Jun 13, 2013 12:30 am

the1templar wrote:damn it guys FS Angry seriously, i ask for feed back and no one bothers. whatever, Twi Derp seems it was silly to ask for help. guess i do live up well to my nickname.

[SPOILERS BELOW] (Ohh the bb code stuff isn't there, it just instantly puts the words into what it should appear as!)
Well I've started reading it, and since I'm to lazy to make a PM or a thread in Fic sub-forum I'll just do it here.
Seems very quick time wise, not really going in depth. Especially at the beginning of it. Also tbh, some of the names are... iffy to me. I do kinda like the idea, but was Luna using the "I'll send you to the moon" thing as just a threat? maybe because it isn't completed but I do have way to many questions like who Twig was, how the Changelings got into Canterlot so easily. Where were the guards? How did Luna get back to the castle? Ohh and one more thing. These phrases seems out of order: After a few minutes she could stand without any pain. and The painkillers began slowly to kick in allowing Luna to walk. Also it seems like it will be a major long project. Do you really want to try to make a fan fic that could go on for MANY chapters? Given we did have exceptions... Like Kkat who made Fallout Equestria, and was her first fan fiction she EVER wrote...

Did I forget I SUCK at doing reviews? I sound like a total dick now... No hard feelings intended in my (utter) failure of a review... I'll stick back to what I usually do. not going into huge depth only talk about good things that I've been doing for the last few months.
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Post  Aeon_the_Hermit Thu Jun 13, 2013 7:08 am

Celestia Stare....... this is an interesting upgrade, if a bit less appealing visually.
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Post  Lunarzius Thu Jun 13, 2013 9:49 am

Aeon_the_Hermit wrote:Celestia Stare....... this is an interesting upgrade, if a bit less appealing visually.
I agree with this statement, although the new emotes drop down is much better than the last one, as that often caused formatting issues on mobile devices with their browsers set to Desktop Mode.
I'll test the whole thing later to make sure it all works fine and if it doesn't attempt to trouble shoot.
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Post  the1templar Thu Jun 13, 2013 10:37 am

Lordleelee2/ZardBrood wrote:
the1templar wrote:damn it guys FS Angry seriously, i ask for feed back and no one bothers. whatever, Twi Derp seems it was silly to ask for help. guess i do live up well to my nickname.



[SPOILERS BELOW] (Ohh the bb code stuff isn't there, it just instantly puts the words into what it should appear as!)
Well I've started reading it, and since I'm to lazy to make a PM or a thread in Fic sub-forum I'll just do it here.
Seems very quick time wise, not really going in depth. Especially at the beginning of it. Also tbh, some of the names are... iffy to me. I do kinda like the idea, but was Luna using the "I'll send you to the moon" thing as just a threat? maybe because it isn't completed but I do have way to many questions like who Twig was, how the Changelings got into Canterlot so easily. Where were the guards? How did Luna get back to the castle? Ohh and one more thing. These phrases seems out of order: After a few minutes she could stand without any pain. and The painkillers began slowly to kick in allowing Luna to walk. Also it seems like it will be a major long project. Do you really want to try to make a fan fic that could go on for MANY chapters? Given we did have exceptions... Like Kkat who made Fallout Equestria, and was her first fan fiction she EVER wrote...

Did I forget I SUCK at doing reviews? I sound like a total dick now... No hard feelings intended in my (utter) failure of a review... I'll stick back to what I usually do. not going into huge depth only talk about good things that I've been doing for the last few months.
Don't worry i am the editor. The first one was way worse. i am expanding on what Insane originally had. Can't do much about names. Twig is a small white changeling. Now the changeling getting into canterlot was my shits and giggles to (hopefully) get people to read the next chapter. The original didn't leave lose ends and i do, so lose ends. Yeah the phrases sound a little off to me but i didn't know what to do with 'em. As for many chapter, that is up to insane, i will edit as many as he writes.
All in all:
you didn't sound like a dick to me. you gave what i asked for and it wasn't half bad. I write short stories actually. 1 or 2 chapter mostly. But I recently found i love to edit. all i do is expand on original ideas and i liked to pass the time in a fun way.see ya around.
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Post  Lordleelee2/ZardBrood Thu Jun 13, 2013 11:03 am

Lunarzius wrote:
Aeon_the_Hermit wrote:Celestia Stare....... this is an interesting upgrade, if a bit less appealing visually.




I agree with this statement, although the new emotes drop down is much better than the last one, as that often caused formatting issues on mobile devices with their browsers set to Desktop Mode.
I'll test the whole thing later to make sure it all works fine and if it doesn't attempt to trouble shoot.


Yea and try to copy  phrase somewhere else... It completely fucks with the the rest of the words AFTER that paste... Atleast I can remove the formatting, and show the bb code still. Only thing I like is the new quote thing, and emote drop down thing.
[EDIT] So I did good on that. Good to know. It was also my first run in with this terrible update, for the most part, as well.
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Post  Lunarzius Thu Jun 13, 2013 12:15 pm

I actually manually insert the HTML code most of the time, it saves time.
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Post  Lightningcould Thu Jun 13, 2013 7:45 pm

Lunarzius wrote:I actually manually insert the HTML code most of the time, it saves time.

I'll manually insert the HTML code into you most of the time.
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Post  the1templar Thu Jun 13, 2013 10:26 pm

Oh one other thing.
your post
"Also tbh, some of the names are... iffy to me."
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so in a world filled with multicolored creatures that can fly, use magic, bend reality, and move the sun and moon AND have creatures with some silly ass name such ass bon bon, Whimsey Weatherbe(dragon), or Owlowiscious. And your have a problem with the names Twig and Ghost.
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Post  Lordleelee2/ZardBrood Thu Jun 13, 2013 10:33 pm

The names don't really fit with the aspects, besides the color of there skin. Also they are changelings and form my understanding are tribals, so I would've expected more weird names then generic easy to come up with ones. You know, using the noggin to the max to come up with unique names for unique characters.
Also the names like Luna and Celestia mean well Sun and Moon in Latin, so it's only natural to have names like that for what they are the goddesses of. And the appletly (Buck spelling) named pony 'Octavia' is the female variant of Octavius which, from history, was a name for the upper class/royalty.


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Post  Lunarzius Fri Jun 14, 2013 10:14 am

> Using the noggin to the max to come up with unique names for unique characters

KInda like what I do with all the names for my AIs. Not that they've been featured in a book type thing. Yet.
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Post  Lightningcould Fri Jun 14, 2013 10:33 am

Hai Hammy
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Post  the1templar Fri Jun 14, 2013 11:00 am

i thought her name was that way because of an octave musically but i could be wrong.
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Post  Lordleelee2/ZardBrood Fri Jun 14, 2013 12:02 pm

Ok now I couldn't stop typing in the quote... Da hell?
I've always known it to be from Octavius, but ehh it might be.
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Post  Lightningcould Fri Jun 14, 2013 12:09 pm

Hai Zard :3
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Post  Wolf Trainer Fri Jun 14, 2013 8:11 pm

LC! You Zarded the thread with your "hello!" You shall now serve one MILLION years! No visitors! What are your last words you wish to be remembered by!?

Also. Update on me everypony: ... Damn I miss posting here more. I miss you guys, be it the few active ones or the more active ones. I should still be a little more active starting next week. So I hope to see you all then. I MIGHT do a few nights of Amnesia streams, or other streams (maybe art if I get motivated enough :P). If I do, I'd love to see you ponies there to jump and laugh at the ghosties with me.
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Post  Lordleelee2/ZardBrood Fri Jun 14, 2013 8:14 pm

Unless something tragic happens with family, technology, or me you can count me in to watching. I also volunteer as tribute the tester to make sure the stream works...
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Post  AirmanAlex Fri Jun 14, 2013 8:33 pm

I'd love to watch you wet your self playing amnesia :P or art.
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Post  Lordleelee2/ZardBrood Fri Jun 14, 2013 8:49 pm

I'd love to see art be made, and see if he ends up flipping off his web came again... You know, get more screenies. :P
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Post  Wolf Trainer Fri Jun 14, 2013 11:25 pm

Zard, I will be both very impressed and creeped out if you still have that picture.
For the Amnesia of course I will have the cam on, it's no fun if you can't see my shock and terror. XD
For the art... Eh, if I do that then you'll need less ugly on the screen as it is. So I'd probably take my face cam off.
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Post  Lordleelee2/ZardBrood Fri Jun 14, 2013 11:32 pm

Well Wolf, better get a restraining order :P Yea I still got them book marked still.
You no ugly
Yea it probably be best to have the cam off for art because, we can't see all the art taking place. Amnesia needs it for what you said... And to continue my creeperness :P.
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Post  Lightningcould Fri Jun 14, 2013 11:42 pm

Heeey, why did you remove my post?
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Post  Lordleelee2/ZardBrood Fri Jun 14, 2013 11:45 pm

Umm what post? You sure you didn't exit the post without sending the said message?
[EDIT] Done.
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